your English-speaking friend, who lives in your town, has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. write an email to your friend in your email. recommend a new sport that will be suitable for your friend to learn. example how your friend could learn this sport. suggest that you both learn this sport together.

Dear friend, How are you? I think your days are going better I have some advice for you about the new sport there are many
sport
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, but in my opinion
basketball
will be the best. There are many benefits
while
playing
basketball
. it's very easy to learn. because you have high too so
this
game is
very
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sweet table for everyone. You can learn
basketball
by
practicing
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practising
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one
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for one
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hour per day after your job or in
morning
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time but the suitable time will be
at
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in
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morning
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because if you are lazy to do some exercise in the morning, you can just play
basketball
and we both are going to practice together. It will be very easy if we did
this
together I
also
don't have
many
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knowledge about
basketball
, so I
also
have to learn about the sport kind regards
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  • advice
  • recommend
  • suitable
  • learn
  • coach
  • lessons
  • tutorial videos
  • practice
  • tennis club
  • group
  • schedule
  • regularly
  • participants
  • tournaments
  • friendly matches
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