The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart displays the percentages of employees, by
sector
and gender, that worked in Australia the previous year.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the numbers of Linking Words
men
working are higher than the ones of Use synonyms
women
, with the only exception of the professionals and clerical Use synonyms
sector
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the most famous Linking Words
sector
for Use synonyms
men
was tradespeople, Use synonyms
while
for Linking Words
women
was clerical.
First of all, Use synonyms
it is clear that
for all types of jobs, Linking Words
men
had percentages not under 400, the labourer's Use synonyms
sector
had the lowest statistic with only 400, in comparison to the tradespeople Use synonyms
sector
, which in the same year stood at 900. Other Use synonyms
sectors
, Use synonyms
such
as managers, semi-professionals and production stood between 500 and 600.
Linking Words
On the contrary
, Linking Words
women
were fewer numbers Use synonyms
last
year, which levelled between 100 and almost 1000. The less common Linking Words
sectors
were the production and tradespeople ones. Labourers, managers and semi-professionals had figures between 200 and 350. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, for both the professional and clerical Linking Words
sectors
, Use synonyms
women
undertook Use synonyms
men
reaching higher percentages, 700 and 980 respectively, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
men
for the same Use synonyms
sectors
had roughly 650 and 880 for each.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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