The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart displays the percentages of employees, by
sector
and gender, that worked in Australia the previous year.
Overall
, the numbers of
men
working are higher than the ones of
women
, with the only exception of the professionals and clerical
sector
.
Furthermore
, the most famous
sector
for
men
was tradespeople,
while
for
women
was clerical. First of all,
it is clear that
for all types of jobs,
men
had percentages not under 400, the labourer's
sector
had the lowest statistic with only 400, in comparison to the tradespeople
sector
, which in the same year stood at 900. Other
sectors
,
such
as managers, semi-professionals and production stood between 500 and 600.
On the contrary
,
women
were fewer numbers
last
year, which levelled between 100 and almost 1000. The less common
sectors
were the production and tradespeople ones. Labourers, managers and semi-professionals had figures between 200 and 350.
On the other hand
, for both the professional and clerical
sectors
,
women
undertook
men
reaching higher percentages, 700 and 980 respectively,
while
men
for the same
sectors
had roughly 650 and 880 for each.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sector, men, women, sectors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Employment figures
  • Sectors
  • Significant disparities
  • Gender balance
  • Skewed
  • Trends
  • Patterns
  • Dominant
  • Inferred
  • Labor market
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Insights
  • Implications
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