The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The two pie chart displays the percentages on what is the marital status of Canadians and Australian inhabitants.
Overall
, in both countries, the highest numbers are for people
separated but not divorced, with Canada
having a higher percentage
than Australia, while
most Australians, instead
, are married.
First of all, the percentage
of being married in Canada
stood at 53%, while
married couples had only a percentage
of 29%. The other categories have lower data, with only 7% for people
that have never been married or are widowed.
On the contrary
, in Australia, having a percentage
of 46%, people
are more likely to be married, a similar percentage
is shown for married people
who only separated with about 41%. So, in contrast
with Canada
, the numbers are not overtaken by separated couples, but we have a more balanced situation. Furthermore
, the other categories share a similar percentage
with the one in Canada
, widowed people
have 1% less, with only 6%, while
divorce people
have a 2%, in comparison with Canada
which had 1%. and finally
, single people
share a percentage
of only 5%.Submitted by cecconisofia2002 on
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