Mrs Barrett, an English Speaking woman who live in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Suggest how can you help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barret I am writing

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later regarding

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you. I have many free time as well. I had done

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job

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before too. I will be free next summer as before. I have many ideas about

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job

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Well

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it will be very easy for you. If I got to help you, I can help you by cooking rice, cleaning

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the floor

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, washing dishes, clothes, and many other things I have

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family

since

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for

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five years because I live alone in

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town if I got

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opportunity I will be very happy to do

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job

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. I have four years

experience

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field. It will be easy for me to do

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work. I left my before

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because of lots

problems

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and

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I have a

five time

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job

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so in a week two days I will be absent, so I think you will accept my words and give me a chance to join you. Waiting for your reply kind regards Mary

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

166 words

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