The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003.
The data illustrates the
datails
of the average Correct your spelling
data
number
of guests entering a musuem
in summer and Correct your spelling
museum
wintwer
in 2003 Correct your spelling
winter
within
0900H in the morning Change preposition
from
untill
1800H in the evening.
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until
Overall
, what stands out from the data is the fluctuation of the figures and that the number
of visitors
in summer accounts for the larger number
compared to the number
of visitors
in winter.
On the one hand, during summer we can see on the data the rapid increase of visitors
in the day and reaches its highest point around 1200H at a total number
of under 1600 people, before a dramatic decrease and then
the coming of visitors
will end at around 1700H.
On the other hand
, during winter, the Museum experienced a decrese
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decrease
of
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in
visitors
. It fluctuated a little bit but stays relatively low. The inflated number
is around 600 from 1000H to 12000H. Furthermore
, after 1400H no more guests are going to the Museum.Submitted by Anneya
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