The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003.

The data illustrates the

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data

of the average

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of guests entering a

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museum

in summer and

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winter

in 2003

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from

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0900H in the morning

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until

1800H in the evening.

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, what stands out from the data is the fluctuation of the figures and that the

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of

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in summer accounts for the larger

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compared to the

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of

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in winter. On the one hand, during summer we can see on the data the rapid increase of

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in the day and reaches its highest point around 1200H at a total

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of under 1600 people, before a dramatic decrease and

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the coming of

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will end at around 1700H.

On the other hand

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, during winter, the Museum experienced a

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decrease

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visitors

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. It fluctuated a little bit but stays relatively low. The inflated

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is around 600 from 1000H to 12000H.

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, after 1400H no more guests are going to the Museum.