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many manufactured food and drink producks contain high levels of sugar

#food #drink #producks #levels #sugar
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Recently,
products
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 with
sugar
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 in which the
sugar
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 ratio is high led to some health problems for
people
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 have become a popular topic and many
people
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 think it is worth discussing.
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, they still have not come to an agreement with each other on whether more expensive should be had
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products
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 to decrease the tendency of
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 to eat these or not. Whatever each side of the argument thinks, I strongly agree that definitely, the government must make more expensive sugary
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 in order to
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decline
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 encourage
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 from these
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 product. There are many reasons why I think so.
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 is the by far the best harmful food for healthy. It does not only do a disservice to old
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 but
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 ıt is dangerous material for all ages group, even babies.
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, consuming sugary
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 causes many health problems for
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 diabetes, and heart disease. Nowadays, the age of diabetes can regress from 40 ages in the past to 10 ages in now.
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, at least one person in every family has diabetes. Another reason is that consuming
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products
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 too much can become fat like obesity and rapid weight gain so they can have a bad
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 shape and all organs in their
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 can cover fat.
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 is very dangerous for human beings.
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, they can tire easily and they cannot find clothes which are suitable for their
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.
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, many
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 agree that opposite my idea.
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 our
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 needs
sugar
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 especially the brain because the nutritional source of the brain feeds only
sugar
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 and if the brain has enough
sugar
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, it will work very well.
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 all
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 should eat
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 with
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. ,
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 sugary product gives
people
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 more energy than other food consumption and they improve the balance of our blood instantly.
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, experts said if somebody blackouts, somebody will eat
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products
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.
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, in spite of the fact that
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 has benefits and needs for some organs, it effect very detrimental to the human
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. In ,addition
people
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 meet
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 their
sugar
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 needs by eating fruit which includes
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.
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sugar
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products
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