The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates whether people of both genders were studying full-time or part-time during their
further
education
in Britain in three periods which are 1970, 1980 and 1990.
It is worth noticing that the number
of males
who get part-time education
dropped from 1000 to 850 and went up to 900 from 1970 to 1990 while
the number
of females kept increasing. Fewer women get part-time education
in 1970 and 1980 than men but the situation inverse in 1990. There were 900 and 1100 males
and females who accepted part-time education
in 1990 respectively. The number
of men in full-time education
was twice higher as women in 1970. However
, more women participated in full-time education
than men in 1980, and both genders reached the same number
, 200, in full-time education
in 1990.
Overall
, the number
of males
and females in part-time education
is way larger than in full-time education
. In addition
, the number
of both genders in full and part-time education
rose slightly from 1970 to 1990, except for males
in part-time education
turbulent during this
period.Submitted by BeckyJ on
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