The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010
The given bar chart illustrates the amount of the UK population who consumed recommended fruit and vegetables per day from 2002 to 2010.
Overall
, it is clear that
figures
for women
are higher in all three years than for men
and children
.
To begin
with, men
accounted for 22% in 2002 which is two times bigger than children
in this
year
(11%). Furthermore
, this
year
's figures
for women
was 25% which is almost the same as men
in 2010. Additionally
, in 2006 men
accounted for 28%, while
this
year
Change noun form
year's
figures
for women
were 32% which is two times higher than children
this
year
(16%).
By contrast
, in 2010 figures
for woman and children
was 27% and 14% respectively.Furthermore
, this
year
's figures
for women
was 25% which is almost the same as men
in 2010. Additionally
, in 2006 men
accounted for 28%, while
this
year
figures
for women
were 32% which is two times higher than children
this
year
(16%).Submitted by ieltsteaching0 on
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