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It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they use to be. Give some reason why this is change has happened and suggest how family could be brought together.

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Artificial Intelligence (AI) has revolutionized the world in ways we could not have imagined a few decades ago. AI, defined as the simulation of human intelligence processes by machines, particularly computer systems, has become a ubiquitous entity in our everyday
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. From voice-powered personal assistants like Siri and Alexa to more underlying and fundamental technologies
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 algorithms, suggestive searches, and autonomously-powered self-driving vehicles, AI is on the fast track to becoming a significant player in the global economy. The development of AI has been fueled by advancements in machine learning and deep learning. Machine learning is a scientific discipline that uses algorithms to allow computers to learn from data.
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, deep learning utilizes neural networks with several layers - these are known as deep neural networks. The increased computational power of modern systems and the vast amount of data available for training have propelled these technologies forward. The impact of AI on society is profound. AI technology has improved efficiency and productivity in industries ranging from healthcare to transportation to education. In healthcare, AI can analyze data to predict patient outcomes, recommend treatments, and even perform some medical procedures. In transportation, self-driving cars are becoming increasingly common, promising to reduce accidents and improve traffic flow. In education, AI-powered teaching aids can provide personalized learning experiences for students.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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