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Many people claiming that hopping from one workplace to another is more beneficial than staying in one job for a very long time. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #workplace #job #time
Many
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individuals
 have a belief that the change of a
worlplace
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workplace
to another
is
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more bring more benefits than remaining
doing
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 a
job
 for a long
time
. From my perspective, I
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 not totally agree with
this
 statement and claim that following a certain is more
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advantageous
. It is true that there are many new opportunities appearing to
the
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employees when they decide to start working in a new environment.
To begin
 with, after a long
time
 working in a company, many workers feel stressed and bored because the management
as well as
 work
time
 is not suit
to
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 them.
Therefore
, moving to another organization
that is
 more professional
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 them develop themselves better. In
addtion
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addition
, the
empoyees
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employees
also
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have
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chance
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a chance
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 to meet new experienced colleagues and learn from them through the process of doing
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a project
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 together.
In
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the other hand, I believe that having a stable
job
 is more beneficial than changing
occupation
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occupations
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contanstly
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constantly
. It is because the workers lose
a
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plenty of
time
 to get used to
working
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the working
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 environment when moving to another workplace
while
 the
empoyees
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employees
 having a stable
job
 can save
time
 to completely focus on their duty
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firm
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the firm
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.
Also
, after working for a long
time
, the workers can prove their talents and
loyaly
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loyalty
loyal
 to the company and the boss can promote them higher position. In conclusion,
although
 a change of
job
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some
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certain benefits, it is just a
temporay
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temporary
 way . I think
any
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all
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emloyees
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employees
they
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apply
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should have a stable
job
.
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