The chart below shows figures for attendances at hospital emergency care departments in Northern Ireland by age group in December 2016 and 2017.
Given bar chart demonstrates the visiting rate of a certain hospital in Northern Ireland, ranging from December 2016 to December 2017. It
further
separates the attendance by age, including 0 to over 75.
First of all, the most intriguing fact is that people over 75 and under 5 years old make up the major portion, at a rate of over 60 and around 50 respectively. Whereas
, aged 5-15 is the less group in number, approximately at the level of 20. On the other hand
, it is obvious that from aged 16 to 74 are nearly at same the range, around 30 people out of 1000.
Generally speaking, it is evident that all figures experienced growth over one year. However
, those aged over 75 have spiked more significantly, around 5 to 7. Following is the individuals under 5, soared about 2 to 3 people. Nevertheless
, other sections only increased slightly, around 0.5 to 1 citizen.Submitted by aaron.ten.tw on
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