Not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

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becoming ignorant.

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the fact that residents in the contemporary world are heavily judged by their enlightenment.

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as a major is an ever-increasing problem that impacts entire societies nowadays. It is mainly caused by not promoting adequate facilities for postgraduates so as to become concerned about

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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gender stereotypes
societal norms
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