Not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

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In the modern days, there

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is hardly any chance to disprove the fact that the number of

science

students was shrinking when compared to other disciplines.

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increasingly common and

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causing

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many major problems.The following essay will discuss the main reasons for

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controversial issue and describe the possible negative effects it may bring. As far as I am concerned, to study

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science

subjects

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sextremely

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sophisticated strenuous calculating skills and deductive thinking

as well as

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outstanding

memorizing

ccapability

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capability

. Many students around the world do not have those qualities

due to

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, they choose any easy stream and these students indulge in leisure.

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, the

science

field is rather unimaginative because it

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numbers,calculations,geometric shapes,symbols,

theories

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bringing

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theoretical mechanical

. The probable effects of

this

problem consist of teenagers lacking attentiveness towards

science

and

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becoming ignorant.

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directly affects the intelligence level of the country as a whole and makes it difficult to gain respect from other individuals

as well as

having considerably decreased business opportunities,

due to

the fact that residents in the contemporary world are heavily judged by their enlightenment.

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, there will be a manpower shortage in the

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medical field and

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would bring more

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problems

to our society.

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as hospitals will

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overloaded with patients meanwhile lacking doctors or more and more people being unaware of diseases

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their lack of medical knowledge .

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field is

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issue which includes a society that thirsts

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for

updated information,

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has any inventions or innovations. In conclusion, not choosing

science

as a major is an ever-increasing problem that impacts entire societies nowadays. It is mainly caused by not promoting adequate facilities for postgraduates so as to become concerned about

this

specialization. It is insistent that measures are taken to solve

this

matter before it is too late.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

Fully explain your ideas

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