Task 1: The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in the total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart displays the proportion of renewable
energy
in the total energy
supply in 4 countries
from 1997 to 2010. There are 4 countries
that are in different situations related to supplying renewable energy
.
Firstly
, in Australia
and Sweden
there were below 10% from 1997 to 2010. In Add a comma
,Sweden
Australia
, in 1997 there were less than 10%, and in Sweden
, in 2010 there were less than 10%. Australia
was decreasing gradually from 1997 to 2010, but Sweden
has increased gradually from 1997 to 2010.
Whereas
Iceland
and Turkey
were supplying massively compared to Australia
and Sweden
. In Iceland
, in 1997 there was nearly 45%, in 2000 there was precisely 60%, and in 2010 there was 70%. In Turkey
, the highest proportion was more than 40% in 2000, in 1997 there was less than 40%, and in 2010 there was approximately 32%.
In summary, Iceland
and Turkey
are the biggest countries
that are supplying renewable energy
among those 4 countries
. Iceland
was increasing nearly 25% from 1997 to 2010, by contrast
, Turkey
was decreasing nearly 10% from 2000 to 2010. The above information describes bar data.Submitted by ryujaekwang0928 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, countries, australia, sweden, iceland, turkey with synonyms.
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