In many places traditional food has been replaced by international fast food. This has adverse effects on individuals and society. Do you agree or disagree?

#places #food #effects #individuals #society

Nowadays's world is becoming a village

due to

globalization. The American food chains selling Burger and Pizza are gaining popularity all around the world. No doubt, they are changing the eating habits of people but what's wrong with that? I think everyone has the right to eat what they want, who are we to judge them? Some groups of the population think that their local food is best and healthy. Most of them in

this

section are old aged persons and they don't like the changes happening in society.

This

is natural after spending their whole life in conservation, when they see liberalism, they don't like that.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

107 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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In many places traditional food has been replaced by international fast food. This has adverse effects on individuals and society. Do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?

Today, many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. What problems does this cause? Wha can be done about this?

some people believe that the development of artificial intelligence will make human labour obsolete. others think that work performed by humans will always be important. discuss both view and ur own opinion

Some feel that cities should be designed to be beautiful while others feel their functionality is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.