The table and chart below. Give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the chart shows how it was distributed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

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The tabular chart depicts the information about sources from where the police in a particular region of Britain got funds

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the pie graph illustrates the expenditure during the years 2017 and 2018.

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, the police got its budget from the national government, local taxes and grants from other sources and the value rose in a year.

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, the money was spent mainly on the wages of officers and other staff and the remaining part on technology and buildings

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transportation. Again, to mention, the salaries of police workers

got a reduction

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were reduced

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during

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one-year period

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the funding for the technical branch

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inflated almost twice. It is evident from the table that out of the three main sources, the national government contributes the highest by providing 175.5 million pounds in 2017 and

increase

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the amount to 177.8 million pounds in the following year. The numbers from regional taxes

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inclined

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increased

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by 11.1 million pounds in 2018.

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, having a look at the pie chart,

it is clear that

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the income of law-protectors has faced a substantial decrease in 2018 which was three-quarters of the total distribution in 2017.

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