It is the responsibility of governments to protect the health of children by combating obesity. The governement should entact laws against sugary drinks and fast food restaurants among other measures. Do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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Many
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are suffering from a number of
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problems
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as obesity, diabetes, and depression
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the government should protect the heir’s
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through implied laws and regulations against some food items that are harmful to offspring. So I agree with
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statement.
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, the number of
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facing many
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issues. One of the main
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problems is obesity because sugary drinks and fast foodstuff are found all over the globe, not only in shops but
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in advertisements causing to be more attracted to and addicted to
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types of foods. So the authority should take action to fix higher taxes for the sweeter and fast food items and
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types of factories.
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, enact laws for reducing the sugar amount of beverages and label the sugar content.
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, in Sri Lanka, implied laws against sweet items which is every item should contain a label of sugar amount denoted by different colours on the front side of the bottle.
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, politics can reduce the problems through the education and well-being care system. The ministry makes awareness of the
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through the education curriculum which is, how to maintain the body , diet and needed amount of nutrients for every age group.
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create a facility for
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conditions,
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, many developing countries follow the type of awareness and maintain every child through check-ups.
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, the ministry should take responsibility for the
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of
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by reducing the intake of sugary drinks and fast food leading to a decrease the obesity.

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