In many countries, the government prioritises economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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Certainly, the government makes economic growth the number one priority
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other concerns in many nations. In
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essay, I will outline the benefits and drawbacks. There are, I feel, many advantages and perhaps the most obvious one is that it can provide numerous job opportunities to their residents. If the
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focus on developing the economy, they invariably have more start-up companies and multinational companies, and
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makes local
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attain well-paid jobs more effectively and is potentially absolutely beneficial.
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, the government in China
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introduces policies to encourage
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economic development, creating thousands of positions
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Chinese
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, and
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ultimately contributes to a better quality of life among their citizens.
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, I believe there are some disadvantages.
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, it may well sacrifice natural resources
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exchange an economic growth. Factories in the rural area of China,
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, emits a huge amount of toxic emission. As
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, the countryside is polluted and the ecosystem has become unbalanced, which means
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arguably damages the environment and harms
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well-being.
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, it usually leads to a sense of isolation and loneliness since
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only focus on work and have less time with their loved ones. When the nation prioritizes developing the economy,
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are more likely to spend more time working, in turn typically resulting in less
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with their family members and breaking down. What
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does is make it extremely detrimental. In conclusion, there are clear positive and negative effects of focusing solely on economic growth as I mentioned above.
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that the introduction clearly presents the main points and sets the tone for the essay. Additionally, make sure that the conclusion effectively summarizes the main arguments and provides a clear final thought.
Task Achievement
Address the advantages and disadvantages of prioritizing economic growth in a more balanced manner. Ensure that the examples provided are relevant and support the points made.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic growth
  • quality of life
  • standard of living
  • infrastructure development
  • employment opportunities
  • environmental impact
  • wealth disparity
  • modernization
  • sustainable development
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • industrialization
  • ecological footprint
  • capital investment
  • urbanization
  • economic prosperity
  • fiscal policy
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