THE LINE GRAPH SHOWS THE PROPORTION OF TOURISTS WHO VISITED CERTAIN BRIGHTON ATTRACTIONS IN ENGLAND FOR 30 YEARS BETWEEN 1980 AND 2010.

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THE LINE GRAPH SHOWS THE PROPORTION OF TOURISTS WHO VISITED CERTAIN BRIGHTON ATTRACTIONS IN ENGLAND FOR 30 YEARS BETWEEN 1980 AND 2010. WHAT ARE GIVEN TO US?WE HAVE 4 LINES IN

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THE GRAPH

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.EACH ONE HAS THEIR OWN COLOR,WHAT HELPS US DISTINGUISH

ATRRACTIONS

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ATTRACTIONS

.WE HAVE PERSANTAGE AND YEARS TO COMPARE THEM.WE'RE GOING TO DISCUSS WHICH IS THE BEST LOVED AND WHICH IS LOVELESSED. IN 2010 LEAST POPULAR ATTRACTION WAS

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THE ART

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GALLERY,BUT IN

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1985 IT WAS THE POPULAR ONE.WE CAN SEE THAT IN 2010 THE MOST POPULAR

ATTRACION

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ATTRACTION

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WAS

PAVILION

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THE PAVILION

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WITH 37 PERSANTAGE,WHICH INCREASED FROM 22.

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IT WAS THE ONLY ATTRACTION THAT HAS REACHED 48 PROPOTION.STABLY KEPT THE BAR AT THE BOTTOM-PIER,BUT

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IT OVERTAKED

ART

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THE ART

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GALLERY. WHAT ABOUT THE FESTIVAL? IT STEADILY FELL DOWN TO 25 FROM 30 RATE AND KEPT GOING. CLARIFY,PEOPLE'S FAVOURITE ATTRACION WAS PAVILION

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AND DISLIKED ONE WAS PIER.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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3 paragraphs

143 words

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THE LINE GRAPH SHOWS THE PROPORTION OF TOURISTS WHO VISITED CERTAIN BRIGHTON ATTRACTIONS IN ENGLAND FOR 30 YEARS BETWEEN 1980 AND 2010.

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case. Do you think this is a positive or negative situation.

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages ?

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In many countries, the government prioritizes economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?