The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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As an introduction, the pie charts illustrate the percentages of electricity which was produced by different sources including

renewables

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, during the year 2009 in

Germany

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and in

France

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Overall

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, it can be seen that in

Germany

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the largest amount of power was generated through conventional thermal process,

whereas

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France

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it was by nuclear method.

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, the most popular

renewables

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Germany

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were biomass and wind

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that of

France

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was hydroelectricity. In

Germany

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, more than half of energy was generated through conventional thermal sources at 59.6%,

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nuclear parts contributed at 23% and

renewables

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produced 17.4%. In

France

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, around three quarters were made from the nuclear method,

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conventional thermal and

renewables

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produced 10.3% and 13.7% respectively. Turning to

renewables

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, an almost equal percentage of power is produced by biomass and wind at 39.3% and 36.9% in

Germany

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. The rest was from hydroelectric and solar at 17.7% and 6.1% respectively.

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, the hydroelectric method generated more than three-quarters of the requirement at 80.5% in

France

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while

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biomass and wind contributed in roughly similar proportions at around 10% with the least contribution from solar power.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words renewables, germany, france with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

186 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

electricity generation
renewable sources
conventional thermal
nuclear power
hydroelectric power
biomass
wind energy
proportion
distribution
significant
contributor

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