The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Information about the
percent
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percentage
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of the Gross domestic Product of the
Uk
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UK
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from IT and the Service Industry for five different
years
is presented by a bar chart.
Overall
, the Service industry
experiences
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very slight growth
trought
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throughout
the whole time,
while
the IT
indstry's
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industry's
industry
values double in the span of eight
years
. Both industries are at their lowest in the
year
1992.
The
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Service
one
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starts with
having
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four
percent
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. of the GDP. Two
years
later there is a rise to 6% and
the
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in the
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following
years
the growth is similar with less
then
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a
percent
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per cent
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per
year
reaching its peak of 8% in the
year
2000. The IT industry starts with a bit more
then
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than
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6% shares of the market. In the
year
1994
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the numbers go up to 8% followed by an insignificant drop of less
then
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a
percent
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per cent
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in 1996.
Then
the values
skyrocket
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to 12% in 1998 and over 14% in the
year
2000,
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percent, years, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • components
  • GDP
  • consumption
  • investment
  • government spending
  • net exports
  • display
  • categories
  • largest
  • increase
  • stable
  • range
  • decline
  • fluctuate
  • gradual
  • positive values
  • negative values
  • overall
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