The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Information about the
percent
of the Gross domestic Product of the Replace the word
percentage
Uk
from IT and the Service Industry for five different Correct your spelling
UK
years
is presented by a bar chart.
Overall
, the Service industry experiences
very slight growth Wrong verb form
experienced
trought
the whole time, Correct your spelling
throughout
while
the IT indstry's
values double in the span of eight Correct your spelling
industry's
industry
years
.
Both industries are at their lowest in the year
1992. The
Service Correct article usage
apply
one
starts with Capitalize word
One
having
four Unnecessary verb
apply
percent
. of the GDP. Two Change the spelling
per cent
years
later there is a rise to 6% and the
following Change preposition
in the
years
the growth is similar with less then
a Replace the word
than
percent
per Change the spelling
per cent
year
reaching its peak of 8% in the year
2000. The IT industry starts with a bit more then
6% shares of the market. In the Replace the word
than
year
1994
the numbers go up to 8% followed by an insignificant drop of less Add a comma
,1994
then
a Replace the word
than
percent
in 1996. Change the spelling
per cent
Then
the values skyrocket
to 12% in 1998 and over 14% in the Wrong verb form
skyrocketed
year
2000,Submitted by evamironova65 on
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