The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the proportion of

visitors

to England who go to see four different attractions (Art Gallery, Pavilion, Pier and Festival) in Brighton from 1980 to 2010.

Overall

,

it is clear that

Pavilion

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had been changed

increadibly

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incredibly

over the period,

also

Art

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the Art

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Gallery fluctuated and

then

fell

down

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significantly.

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The

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other places which are Pier and Festival steadied decline and rose between 1980 and 2010. The percentage of

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the pavilion

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pavilion

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pavilions

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was around 23% in 1980, but in 1995,

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significant

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increased

up

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apply

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to 48%, from

next

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the next

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year the

visitors

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number of visitors

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dramatic

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declined by 20% until 2010. Tourists of Art Gallery started to just over 20%, climbing up to about 38% in 1985, kept reducing to 9%

at the end

of

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given. The proportion of Pier was 10%,

at

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in

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1980, and

then

the percentage

visitors

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of visitors

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steadly

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steadily

went

to

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up

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by over 21% even

there

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though there

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was a little fluctuation over the period. The number of festival

visitors

was exactly 30% at

begin

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year which is 1980, and slightly

drop until

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dropped

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in 1995 and

then

went up again to close

28

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to 28

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% in 2000, after 2000 there

were

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no change

the

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in the

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percentage of tourists until

in

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2010 which means kept near 28%.