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The plans show an office in a university in 2005 and the same office now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The images illustrate the transformation of a university
office
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's floor plan between 2005 and the present.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that the current layout shows fewer rooms and a more spacious
area
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 incorporating new appliances and equipment compared to the past.
First,
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on the right side of the entrance.
Although
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 cabinets and a photocopier have remained in the same place since 2005, there is a new water cooler and a coffee machine that are available for service in the current
office
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area
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.
Moreover
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, the location of the
office
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 room on the northwest side remains the same, and there are no new appliances or equipment added. Looking at the northeast and southwest sides, there was a small room that contained cabinets and desks inside in 2005,
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 currently, the former two
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 rooms are replaced with a meeting
area
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 in the northeast and a waiting
area
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 in the southwest.
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, armchairs and a noticeboard were located near the northeast
office
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 before, and now the two items have been removed because they share a similar location with the waiting
area
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.
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