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The line graph below shows the household recyclling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the household recyclling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
 line graph shows the
rate
 of
recycle
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recycling
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 from 3 three countries which are
UK
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the UK
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, France and Germany through
10-year-period
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a 10-year period
. In summary, we can see that there were up trends in
UK
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the UK
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 and Germany and
fluctuation
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a fluctuation
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 trend in France. For
UK
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the UK
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 the
rate
 started
with
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at
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 around 35% in 2005
then
 rose steadily to 40% in 2009.
the
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The
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rate
 significantly increased 55% in 2011 and
end
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ended
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 with 60% in 2015. Following Germany, the
rate
 didn't start as high as
UK
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the UK
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 around 20% in 2005.
However
, it constantly grew to 58% which was nearly the same as
UK
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the UK
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 in 2015.
On the other hand
, the
rate
 in France was not
good
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as good
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 as the others. It started with more than 50% in 2005 and dipped down to 30% in 2013. The
rate
 rose
up
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apply
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a bit and
end
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ended
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 with 40% in 2015.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • household recycling rates
  • trend analysis
  • comparison
  • significant
  • increase/decrease
  • fluctuations
  • plateau
  • progress
  • environmental implications
  • rate
  • peak
  • upward/downward trend
  • percentage
  • consistently
  • period
  • surpass
  • level off
  • stagnate
  • benchmark
  • time frame
  • sustainable practices
  • waste management
  • recycle
  • dispose
  • landfill
  • renewable resource
  • conservation
  • eco-friendly
  • green initiative
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