A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/ unpaid work. In your letter, - explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum - describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful - give details of when you would be available for work Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

#museum #home #people #work #director #skills #qualities #addresses #sir #madam

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

in response to an advertisement for voluntary work posted on your social media page. I would like to share my interest and apply for the same. I have recently completed my high school education and applying to colleges for

further

education.

Therefore

to support my application for the admission process, I am looking to gain some experience that I can learn from and

also

display in my resume. I have some previous experience of work that I did during school, which might be beneficial here. I am adept with managing crowds and handling events.

In addition

this

, I can

also

make graphic designs for online pages. If you find my profile suitable, I would request you to consider me for the job. I am open to work for next month, from Monday to Friday between 2-6 PM. Please let me know your decision. Yours Sincerely, Sam

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

153 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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