You would like to work in a different city to be closer to your family Write a letter to your employer to request a transfer to another office. Explain why you would like to move Request that your employer place you in a specific city Request that it be completed by a certain date

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Dear Mr Daniel, I am writing to you to request about my job relocation to a city. As I have been away from my hometown for 4years ,
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shift would allow me to be close to my family.
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, my marriage was arranged all of a sudden, things should be arranged so that the formalities would be well performed.
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, my health condition is getting worse day by day, as I am consuming only outside food . I have no other option other than to eat at a restaurant. Certainly, If I had to mention a city that would allow me to stay connected with my family that would be definitely Bangalore, which was my birthplace . I appeal to you to transfer my job to that location with the same salary package and designation as here.
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, Our branch is located just 3km away from my home.
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, it will help me to commute to the workplace.
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my health conditions, the place surely suits me with breezing weather. My memorable day would be in a few weeks i.e., the 15th of September. For all these reasons, I would request you to send me to Bangalore before my marriage rituals. I would be really grateful to you. I am expecting a positive answer from you. Your positive response would help me to have improved health and
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would enhance my personal life. Yours Faithfully Kaveri
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