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The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The line graph illustrates the jobless rates. the
Us
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US
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 and
Japan
 between March 1943 and March 1999. The
horizental
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horizontal
 axis shows the years and the vertical axis. shows the
of
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work force
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workforce
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. I compare the
unemployment
rate
 of the two countries percentages. On the one hand
In
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From
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 1995 to 1999,
Japan
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Japan's
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unemployment
rate
was fluctuating
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fluctuated
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. Between 1998 and 1999,
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the unemployement
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unemployement
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unemployment
percentage
and
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apply
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reach
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reached
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a peack
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peack
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peak
at
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of
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 5:57.
In
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From
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 1993 to 1999
Japan
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Japan's
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 jobless
rate
percentage
was
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apply
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gradually
in creasing
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increased
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.
On the other hand
.
In
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From
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 1993 to 1999 us jobless
rate
was decreasing
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decreased
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. The
us unempro ployment
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US unemployment
percentage
 began at 7% .In 1999,the figure was
deline
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decline
.
the
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The
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percentage
 was 5.5%.
Overall
in
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apply
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1993 to 1999.
Japan
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Japan's
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rate
 was increasing Steadily But un employment
us
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US
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 jobless
percentage
was
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gradually
falling
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fell
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 over the next 6 years,
Japan
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Japan's
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unemployment
percentage
 began at 2.51
ant us
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and the US
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unemployment
rate
 began at 7% Two figures
are fluctuating
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fluctuate
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this
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in this
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 graph.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 89%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, unemployment, rate, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unemployment rates
  • graph
  • trend
  • changes
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • findings
  • observations
  • data
  • statistics
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