The graph below shows the population for India and China since the year 2000 and predicts population growth until 2050.

The graph below shows the population for India and China since the year 2000 and predicts population growth until 2050.
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The graph illustrates how the
population
of
India
and
China
have changed since 2000 and prediction how it will change until 2050. It is apparent that the
population
of
India
has the tendency to grow from its start in 2000 until 2050 as per projections,
while
the
population
of
China
after reaching its peak in approximately 2030 will start to decline steadily in the future. In 2000, the
population
of
China
dominated
over
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India
with approximately 1.25 and 1.0
billion
people
, respectively.
However
, as we can see from the graph, the growth rate of
India
is higher than
China
and will have
same
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population
as
China
with around 1.45
billion
people
in 2030 and keep increasing to its peak at about 1.6
billion
people
according to
the predictions.
While
China
, after being overtaken by
India
in the 2030s is going to experience a steady fall and will decline to 1.4
billion
people
in 2050. In conclusion, even though from 2000 to the present day
China
`s
population
is higher by approximately 200 million
people
than
India
's, it is expected that in 2050,
India
will have more
population
of approximately 200 million
people
than
China
on the contrary
.
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