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The graph below shows the population for India and China since the year 2000 and predicts population growth until 2050.

The graph below shows the population for India and China since the year 2000 and predicts population growth until 2050.
#population #india #china #year #growth
The graph illustrates how the
population
 of
India
 and
China
 have changed since 2000 and prediction how it will change until 2050. It is apparent that the
population
 of
India
 has the tendency to grow from its start in 2000 until 2050 as per projections,
while
 the
population
 of
China
 after reaching its peak in approximately 2030 will start to decline steadily in the future. In 2000, the
population
 of
China
 dominated
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India
 with approximately 1.25 and 1.0
billion
people
, respectively.
However
, as we can see from the graph, the growth rate of
India
 is higher than
China
 and will have
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population
 as
China
 with around 1.45
billion
people
 in 2030 and keep increasing to its peak at about 1.6
billion
people
according to
 the predictions.
While
China
, after being overtaken by
India
 in the 2030s is going to experience a steady fall and will decline to 1.4
billion
people
 in 2050. In conclusion, even though from 2000 to the present day
China
`s
population
 is higher by approximately 200 million
people
 than
India
's, it is expected that in 2050,
India
 will have more
population
 of approximately 200 million
people
 than
China
on the contrary
.
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