The diagram shows the process by which electricity is generated in two types of hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words
The diagram compares the process by which
electricity
is generated in two types of hydroelectric power
stations. Overall
, electricity
produced by a plant
is traditionally produced in three stages, as opposed to in five stages at a run-of-river hydroelectric plant
.
In a traditional hydroelectric power
plant
, river water
rises behind a dam until it is sufficiently high enough to enter an intake pipe near the top. Once it enters, the water
flows down into a much lower turbine
chamber whereupon it causes the machine’s blades to rotate, thus
generating electricity
. This
power
is then
sent via transmission lines to customer’s homes.
On the other hand
, in a run-of-river hydroelectric plant
, the natural flow of the water
running downhill is harnessed to turn the turbine
blades. Initially
, water
is channeled
away from the Change the spelling
channelled
water
’s primary path down a pipe into a turbine
building further
down the hill. On entering the building, the water
causes turbine
blades to rotate which in turn spins a generator that produces electricity
. This
power
is then
conducted by transmission lines above the plant
to where it’s needed. Surplus water
then
exits the plant
and rejoins the river to resume its original course.Submitted by irarahmawati.polkesma on
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