The diagram shows the process by which electricity is generated in two types of hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words

The diagram shows the process by which electricity is generated in two types of hydroelectric power station.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

Write at least 150 words
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The diagram compares the process by which
electricity
is generated in two types of hydroelectric
power
stations.
Overall
,
electricity
produced by a
plant
is traditionally produced in three stages, as opposed to in five stages at a run-of-river hydroelectric
plant
. In a traditional hydroelectric
power
plant
, river
water
rises behind a dam until it is sufficiently high enough to enter an intake pipe near the top. Once it enters, the
water
flows down into a much lower
turbine
chamber whereupon it causes the machine’s blades to rotate,
thus
generating
electricity
.
This
power
is
then
sent via transmission lines to customer’s homes.
On the other hand
, in a run-of-river hydroelectric
plant
, the natural flow of the
water
running downhill is harnessed to turn the
turbine
blades.
Initially
,
water
is
channeled
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away from the
water
’s primary path down a pipe into a
turbine
building
further
down the hill. On entering the building, the
water
causes
turbine
blades to rotate which in turn spins a generator that produces
electricity
.
This
power
is
then
conducted by transmission lines above the
plant
to where it’s needed. Surplus
water
then
exits the
plant
and rejoins the river to resume its original course.
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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, power, plant, water, turbine with synonyms.
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