The given diagram illustrates the various stages in the production of brick manufacturing.

The given diagram illustrates the various stages in the production of brick manufacturing.
The given diagram illustrates the various stages in the production of brick manufacturing.
Overall
,
process
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the process
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requires the
manufacture
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of brick to take ready-made
bricks
by
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six steps, beginning with digging and finishing with
delivery
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the delivery
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act. First of all, the clay is digged from underground
,
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and
then
carried to the metal grid along a roller. After that, sand and water are added to get raw
bricks
by
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two ways,
such
as wire cutter and mould.
Therefore
,
bricks
are dried in the oven
from
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24 to 48 hours. At the next stage of the process, the dried
bricks
are sent to
kiln
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the kiln
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, where they
heated
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in
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moderately at 200 - 980 C,
then
at a high temperature
with
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870 - 1300 C.
Furthermore
, prepared
bricks
forwarded
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to
cooling
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the cooling
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chamber and
lay
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48 - 72 hours, which is the
last
step of the operation.
As a result
, the ready
bricks
are packaged and delivered for the building industry.
Subsequently
, all these processes
repeated
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again to produce
bricks
.
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