The given diagram illustrates the various stages in the production of brick manufacturing.

The given diagram illustrates the various stages in the production of brick manufacturing.
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The given diagram illustrates the various stages in the production of brick manufacturing.
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,
process
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the process
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requires the
manufacture
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of brick to take ready-made
bricks
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by
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in
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six steps, beginning with digging and finishing with
delivery
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the delivery
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act. First of all, the clay is digged from underground
,
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and
then
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carried to the metal grid along a roller. After that, sand and water are added to get raw
bricks
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by
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two ways,
such
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as wire cutter and mould.
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,
bricks
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are dried in the oven
from
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for
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24 to 48 hours. At the next stage of the process, the dried
bricks
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are sent to
kiln
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the kiln
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, where they
heated
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are heated
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in
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moderately at 200 - 980 C,
then
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at a high temperature
with
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of
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870 - 1300 C.
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, prepared
bricks
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forwarded
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to
cooling
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the cooling
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chamber and
lay
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laid within
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48 - 72 hours, which is the
last
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step of the operation.
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, the ready
bricks
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are packaged and delivered for the building industry.
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, all these processes
repeated
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are repeated
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again to produce
bricks
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bricks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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