The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
The bar graph illustrates the number of owned and rented
accommodation
by
households
in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
, the proportion of
households
owning
accommodation
experienced an upward trend,
while
the opposite trend was true for the equivalent number of those renting.
Moreover
, rented
accommodation
was the most popular option for
households
in England and Wales during the first fifty-three years, after that owned ones surpassed its position until the end of the period.
Households
in rented
accommodation
accounted for over 75% in 1918, which was four times higher than the number of
households
owning
accommodation
. It
then
decreased to under 70% in 1939 and
leveled
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off until the year
of
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1953, after which
this
figure saw a rapid fall to 50% in 1971.
In contrast
, the corresponding percentage of those owning
accommodation
increased from about 22% to nearly 31% between 1918 to 1939. After remaining the same during the next
fourteen-year
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,
this
figure reached the same level as its
households
in rented
accommodation
counterparts in 1971.
While
the proportion of
households
having their own
accommodation
witnessed a remarkable growth from 1981 to 2001 from 60% to roughly 70%, the equivalent for those who rented
accommodation
declined by nearly 10% in the same period. The former figure
then
dropped to under 65%,
whereas
the latter increased to over 35% in 2011.
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  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
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