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The pie chart below shows the different platforms used for international news content by people in the United Kingdom in 2019. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the different platforms used for international news content by people in the United Kingdom in 2019. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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information about the community in the UK that used the contrasting platforms for global news content in the year 2019.
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, it shows the proportion of television users who overcome the varieties of the platform.
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 with, television contributed the greater percentage of users
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 of people were likely to hear by mouth which is far less. Below than a fifth of consumers were not interested in international news as same as other internet users. 14
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 of people prefer social media to acquire knowledge of global news.
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, printed newspapers and radio collectively contributed 12
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. Apart from television, only just above two-fifths of people use other platforms to know the international broadcast. even though it is 42
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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