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You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and •Give your reason for writing •Tell about your education •Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.

Dear
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 Walker, First of all, I am writing to express interest in the post of Quality Assurance Manager that I
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 on the bulletin board on 5 November 2023. I believe that my qualifications, skills and abilities I have, they are suitable for that job. Being more specific about my education, I am a current student at Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration and Marketing
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 I still have to finish my dissertation in both subjects.
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, I have been taking a variety of
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developing
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 my skills in the subjects. During my
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 I have held the post of Junior Executive at <PWC Company> in the way of brush up on my leadership abilities, communication skills and
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 solving and financial management in the same way. So, undoubtedly, I gained a lot of experience in the field for the post of Quality Assurance Manager. I am available for
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 at any time. You can contact me most easily by the mobile phone number given above. Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward to meeting you in the
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 future. Yours sincerely, Anabel

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Add a clear reason for writing at the start of the letter, so the reader knows why you write.
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Explain more how your education helps you in QA and name any good skills or goals.
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Give real QA skill and work you did, like how you check work, or how you rate things.
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Fix small grammar and spelling, keep to simple past and present tenses.
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Polite closing and good ending.
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Clear start and end with a proper letter form.
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You tell how to reach you.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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