You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and •Give your reason for writing • Tell about your education • Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job. Write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr. Walker, First of all, I am writing to express interest in the post of Quality Assurance Manager that I
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on the bulletin board on 5 November 2023. I believe that my qualifications, skills and abilities I have, they are suitable for that job.
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more specific about my education, I am a current student at Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration and Marketing but I still have to finish my dissertation in both subjects.
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developing my skills in the subjects. During my
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I have held the post of Junior Executive at <PWC Company>
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up on my leadership abilities, communication skills and
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and financial management in the same way. So, undoubtedly, I gained a lot of experience in the field for the post of Quality Assurance Manager. I am available for interview at any time. You can contact me most easily by the mobile phone number given above. Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward to meeting you in the
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future. Yours sincerely, Anabel
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