The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
The bar chart illustrates how long both genders did leisure activities during 1998 and 1999.
Overall
, it can be seen that there were only women who did part-time jobs and housework, while
the remaining categories show the same trend.
To begin
with, people who don't have work, whether unemployed or retired experienced the same value in both males and females with 80 hours
and just over 70 hours
. While
full-time worker
saw a lower scale at 50 Fix the agreement mistake
workers
hours
for male
and 40 Fix the agreement mistake
males
hours
for female
.
Fix the agreement mistake
females
However
, there were females only who were employed part time
and housewives, with house working had a longer period at almost 60 Add a hyphen
part-time
hours
. Meanwhile, females who did part-time jobs were a little bit lower the
previous one, with 40 Change preposition
than the
hours
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