The chart below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world
The pie chart depict the amount of
water
used in Use synonyms
percentage
for many purposes in six areas of the world namely: North Use synonyms
America
, South Use synonyms
America
, Europe, Africa, Central Use synonyms
Asia
and South East Use synonyms
Asia
. There are three main uses which are described in the chart , relatively: Industrial use, Agricultural use and Domestic use. Visibly, the amount of Use synonyms
water
used for agriculture is extremely high in South Use synonyms
America
, South East Use synonyms
Asia
, Africa and especially in Central Use synonyms
Asia
which is about 80%. Use synonyms
This
means those are four areas having strength in raising anf growing. Linking Words
On the other hand
, the two other areas have a high Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
water
used for industry. The amount of Use synonyms
water
used for domestic is highest in South Use synonyms
America
, which takes 7%. Use synonyms
While
Europe has the highest Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
water
for industrial used, about 53%, Central Use synonyms
Asia
only uses 5% of Use synonyms
water
for it. Use synonyms
This
show the reason why Europe has a developed economy and life-standard but not South Linking Words
Asia
. In conclusion, the pie charts of Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
water
used for various purposes in six parts of the world can not only depicts how Use synonyms
water
in used but Use synonyms
also
the reason for each region’s economy and life-standard.Linking Words
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