The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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the rotation of
silkworm
and the levels of the production of
silk
clothes.
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it can be
notest
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noted
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that the life cycle goes through
fourth
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the fourth
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stages
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where the
silk
fibre
of
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the produced for the next plan in six levels. First and foremost, eggs
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, where is in the first levels of the silkworm's life,
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silkworm
's life
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ten days to become
silkworm
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a silkworm
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larve which feeds on mulberry
loat
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lot
,
then
through about 4-6 weeks larve becomes small and
it
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divides
to
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two
silk
thred
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thread
third
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after that from 3-8 days it changed to cocoon which is the stage before
last
then
after 16 days it
become
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a
dult
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adult
silkworm
called moth.
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which concerns
to
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the production of
the
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silk
clothes , the
silk
cloths are first selected and boiled.
Thereafter
, they are unwound and twisted. In fact, for a single cloth, the unwound thread is measured at astonishing figures, 300 to 800 meters long. Ultimately, the thread is dyed and weaved to make finished goods.
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