The graph shows the number of marriages and divorces in the UK between 1975 and 2000.

The graph shows the number of marriages and divorces in the UK between 1975 and 2000.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph shows the number of marriages and divorces in the UK between 1975 and 2000.
This
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bar shows us how many
people
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married and divorced in the past 25 years in the UK. In belief, the bars of
marriage
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had some changes but only the bar of divorce had constantly increased. Moving to the details, from 1975 to 1985 the
number
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of the four lines of constant argumentation. The
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of
people
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who divorced sharply increased twice from 80 to 260 between 1975 and 1980. The
number
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of
people
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who divorced and 2nd
marriages
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had almost the same count at 230 in 1990 and the
number
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of
people
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who divorced for had first time exceeded 2nd
marriages
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in 1995. All the
marriage
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lines decreased between 1990 and 1995 and only divorces got higher even close to the 1st
marriage
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in 2000.
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, a large amount of
people
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had 2nd
marriages
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and divorces but fewer
people
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want to have their 1st
marriage
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Maybe in the future the
number
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of total
marriages
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will include more 2nd
marriages
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, marriage, number, marriages with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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