The graph shows the number of marriages and divorces in the UK between 1975 and 2000.
This
bar shows us how many people
married and divorced in the past 25 years in the UK. In belief, the bars of marriage
had some changes but only the bar of divorce had constantly increased.
Moving to the details, from 1975 to 1985 the number
of the four lines of constant argumentation. The number
of people
who divorced sharply increased twice from 80 to 260 between 1975 and 1980.
The number
of people
who divorced and 2nd marriages
had almost the same count at 230 in 1990 and the number
of people
who divorced for had first time exceeded 2nd marriages
in 1995. All the marriage
lines decreased between 1990 and 1995 and only divorces got higher even close to the 1st marriage
in 2000.
Furthermore
, a large amount of people
had 2nd marriages
and divorces but fewer people
want to have their 1st marriage
Maybe in the future the number
of total marriages
will include more 2nd marriages
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