Some people believe that children should study all subjects at school, while others think they should only study subjects they are good at or find interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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children

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. Some people

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that studying all the

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others

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that if the

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those

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in which they are good

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interesting

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they will be best

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it because they will focus on it properly. I believe

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should

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all the

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. First of all, when

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children

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study

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all

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i.e. science, maths, arts etc. They will be able to explore

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and everything and will be able to know about other things other than their majors but if the

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some specific

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they

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be able to know about the taste of

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, if

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they will be able to link their

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because they will have some

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about that subject too.

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chemistry

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other

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they will be able to start their own business related to their major field i.e. chemistry but if

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dont

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in future

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stuck in their job or they

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get a decent job

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have any idea about management and business etc. In conclusion, providing

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about all the

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to the

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is good for their exposure and their future. But

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be some specialized team who can decide on behalf of those

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Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

277 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

well-rounded education
discover their interests and strengths
basic understanding
interconnected world
higher motivation
deeper knowledge
mental health
reducing unnecessary stress
boredom
balanced approach
successful specialization
well-informed perspective
solid general education
freedom to delve deeper
specialized future career path

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