Some people believe that children should study all subjects at school, while others think they should only study subjects they are good at or find interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The debate on the
subjects
children
should
study
is long been a part of
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the discussion
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. Some people
belive
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believe
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that studying all the
subjects
will be good for the future of the
children
while
others
belive
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believe
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that if the
children
study
those
subjects
in which they are good
or
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at or
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they find
it
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apply
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interesting
then
they will be best
in
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it because they will focus on it properly. I believe
children
should
study
all the
subject
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subjects
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. First of all, when
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children
study
all
subjects
i.e. science, maths, arts etc. They will be able to explore
each
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and everything and will be able to know about other things other than their majors but if the
children
study
some specific
subjects
than
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then
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they
wont
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won't
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be able to know about the taste of
other subject
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another subject
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.
secondly
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, if
children
study
all the
subjects
then
they will be able to link their
feild
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field
with other
fieldes
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fields
because they will have some
know how
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about that subject too.
For example
, if the
children
study
chemistry
along with
other
subjects
i.e. management
then
they will be able to start their own business related to their major field i.e. chemistry but if
children
dont
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don't
know about these
subjects
then
in future
,
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if they
got
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get
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stuck in their job or they
wont
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won't
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get a decent job
then
they will be unemployed because they
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won't
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have any idea about management and business etc. In conclusion, providing
idea
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ideas
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about all the
subjects
to the
children
is good for their exposure and their future. But
their
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should
also
be some specialized team who can decide on behalf of those
children
who
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need
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to
study
specified
subjects
due to
some reasons.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • well-rounded education
  • discover their interests and strengths
  • basic understanding
  • interconnected world
  • higher motivation
  • deeper knowledge
  • mental health
  • reducing unnecessary stress
  • boredom
  • balanced approach
  • successful specialization
  • well-informed perspective
  • solid general education
  • freedom to delve deeper
  • specialized future career path
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