The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The two pie charts illustrate that six language groups made up the whole British
students
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of a university in England who spoke
languages
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other than
English
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in 2000 and 2010. In 2000, there were 20% of the
students
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merely spoke
English
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. The percentage of people who spoke two
languages
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, including French, German, Spanish, or another language, was 70%.
Students
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who were able to speak three
languages
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were the minority (10%). In 2010, British
students
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who only spoke
English
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dropped considerably from 20% to 10%
while
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students
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who spoke two and three
languages
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both increased by a total of 5%. When it comes to the details,
students
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who spoke French and Spanish
in addition
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to
English
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both went up by 5%
whereas
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those who spoke German maintained the same percentage.
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, the language ability of British
students
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at one university improved from 2000 to 2010. It is worth noticing that monolingual
students
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declined to half of the old figure
while
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the percentage of bilingual and trilingual
students
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both went up.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, languages, english with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportions
  • multilingual
  • linguistic competence
  • significant
  • trend
  • increase/decrease
  • stable
  • popularity
  • relatively
  • decade
  • compare/contrast
  • survey
  • data
  • fluent
  • proficient
  • bilingual
  • predominant
  • minority
  • emerge
  • dwindle
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