The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 200 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 200 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart reveals data
according to
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a 2008 report about the use of
energy
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in the United States from 1980 to the predicted 2030.There are six kinds of
energy
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including
petrol
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and
oil
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, coal, natural gas, nuclear, solar / wind and hydropower.
Overall
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, the vast majority of
energy
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consumption in the USA was
petrol
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and
oil
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, whilst the use of hydropower was mostly the least in the given time.
According to
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the information shown in the graph, Americans relied on
petrol
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and
oil
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the most in the given time which was above 30
quadrillion
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units
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and was even expected to reach 50
quadrillion
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units
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in 2030.
By contrast
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, the consumption of hydropower was never over 5
quadrillion
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units
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and was estimated to experience a plateau period of 2
quadrillion
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units
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after 2010.
To sum up
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, it can be apparently seen that
petrol
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and
oil
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played leading roles in
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energy
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the energy
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supply in the USA over the
5
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last 5
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decades.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, petrol, oil, quadrillion, units with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • depicts
  • trend
  • consumption
  • projections
  • slow growth
  • advancements
  • efficiency
  • acceleration
  • underscoring
  • expanding economy
  • household demands
  • trajectory
  • technological advancements
  • population growth
  • standards of living
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • sustainable energy policies
  • environmental impacts
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