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Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

#children #job #society #mothers #fathers #course #parents
It is true that being a parent is a huge responsibility and raising children is going to be sophisticated if
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 not impossible.
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 I disagree with the idea that we should
therefore
 force all mothers and fathers to attend
to
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parenting
courses
. In my opinion, the idea that all future
parents
 should attend to all of the parenthood preparation is completely impractical. Many
of
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forthcoming
parents
 have a busy schedule, and many
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 willing to attend regular
parents
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courses
. I believe that it would be wrong to
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parents
 who are busy because of their hardscrabble life.
Besides
, even if
parents
 could be forced to attend the classes, I doubt that people would
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 on what good
parents
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, so it would be difficult to
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a
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parenting
courses
 that
suits
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 everyone.
As well as
 being impractical, I would argue that training
courses
 for
parents
 are unnecessary
.
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Parents
parents
 have been raising children without
this
 hierarchy for decades.
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 have
been
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learnt
this
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 skills from their family and surrounding culture.
Moreover
, adults learn to be good
parents
 by instinct, and by getting to know their child.
In addition
to
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,
facing with
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 intricate moments and
figures
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 out how to react to their child and correct the
kid
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 behavior.
Non
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 of
this
 requires either formal or complicated
courses
. In conclusion,
while
 compulsory parenting
courses
 seem to be a good idea, I
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 that
it
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 would be unworkable and quite pointless.
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