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In my countries around the world young people decide to leave their parent's home once they finish school. They start living their own or sharing a house withe friends. Is this a positive ora negative development ? give reasons for your answer and include relevangt examples.

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Nowadays it is become increasingly common
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 youngsters
start
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to start
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 their
independant
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independent
 life by moving out of
parent's
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their parent's
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 house after finishing graduation from school.
This
 situation has
positive
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 impact rather disadvantage .
This
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further
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both
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the
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side
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sides
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 with
illustration
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illustrations
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. There are a plethora of benefits to
individual
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individuals
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 and
parents
 if
individual
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individuals
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 start their own life . First and foremost , youngsters become more
independant
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independent
. They have to take care of their house chores, cleaning and other work by themselves . So, in order to
fullfill
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fulfil
 the needs of survival they have to do
full time
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full-time
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 or
part time
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part-time
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 work and less focus on other
unneccesory
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unnecessary
activity
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activities
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.
therefore
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 young people become more responsible and gain maturity. Other than that they develop
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 skills as they face many
challenge
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challenges
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 in
day to day
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day-to-day
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 life .
Thus
 they
tends
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 to get more confident and self
dependant
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dependent
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.
Moreover
,
adolscent
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adolescent
adolescents
 explore new
culture
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cultures
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,
new
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and new
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 skills and make new friends that
eventully
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eventually
 benefit them in their
career
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careers
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.
On the contrary
,
parents
 can have more time to spend
for
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 themselves because they
dont
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don't
 have to look after their children. On the other side ,
This
 scenario
have
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 some downsides too. In some cases
and
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some
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 negative influence of friends leads
the
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young people to
do
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engage in
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 bad
activity
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activities
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such
 as
drugs
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drug
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 and alcohol consumption and theft to
fullfill
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fulfil
 their needs.
Sometime
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parents
 and child both feel alone.
although
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, keeping children with them ,
parents
 can raise and prepare children for upcoming
challanges
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challenges
 and teach them to distinguish right and wrong choices. To recapitulate, there are some serious
consequances
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consequences
 of
this
 situation. I believe the advantages outweigh the drawbacks of living
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by
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my
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 own.
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