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The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart illustrates information regarding annual weather conditions in terms of temperature and precipitation from
January
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 to
December
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 in Kolkata. From the statistics, it can be inferred that the measure of rainfall in July and August constitutes the highest length on the ground in millimetres. In stark contrast to other months, the volume of water in
December
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 and
January
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 experienced the lowest amount.
On the other hand
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,
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 city experienced the largest number of temperatures in May. The average precipitation figures experience a dramatic climb from
January
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 with well over 50
mm
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 and reach a peak in July at nearly 350
mm
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. Followed by a slump by the end of
December
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 which was just above 1
mm
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 rainfall. Looking at the figures for rainy
days
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 specifically, August has the most
days
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 of rain same as July by a very similar margin.
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, the third-highest amount of rain belonged to September at 300
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. In terms of temperature, the average is approximately 23 Celsius in a year. Despite July having the most rainy
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, May accounted for the hottest month at 30 Celsius.
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,
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 and
January
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 comprised the coolest
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 have 20 Celsius.
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 temperatures stay roughly the same for four months from July to October just under 30,
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 trend, experienced a decline in November at 25.
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