The graph below shows the percentage of dependents in 2000 and the predicted figures in 2050 in five countries, and also gives the world average. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main figures and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given column graph illustrates the
percentage
of dependents
(children below 15 or adults above 65) in five countries in 2000 and also
gives projections for 2050. It also
depicts the world average in the given two years. In 2000, India had the maximum percentage
of dependents
(38%), with Japan, Indonesia and China follows
closely behind with around 34% of Wrong verb form
following
dependents
. Korea had the least
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lowest
percentage
of reliant people (22%). The overall
world population
of children below 15 and adults over 65 was 25%. Looking into the future, an increase in the population
of dependents
is predicted for Indonesia, Korea, China and Japan. In contrast
, in ,India the needy population
is thought to fall from 38% to 32%. In ,Korea the population
is expected to double by 2050, from 22% to 44%. Approximately 15% rise in such
population
is predicted for Japan, whereas
China is thought to show the least increase (2%). The world average of dependents
is expected to go up from about 25% to nearly 42%. Overall
, the percentage
of dependents
is expected to decrease in India whereas
in the other four countries
it is projected to increase.Add a comma
countries,
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