The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.
The line chart illustrates the
unemployment
percentages in the United States
and Japan
over a six-year period from March
1993 to March
1999. Overall
, the unemployment
rate
decreased in the United States
while
it increased in Japan
.
Beginning with the United States
, the unemployment
rate
started at 7% in March
1993 and then
gradually declined to approximately 4.1% by March
1999. This
marked a significant reduction of about 2.9% over the six-year span.
In contrast
, Japan
experienced a gradual increase in its unemployment
rate
during the same period. In March
1993, the unemployment
rate
was 2.4%, which then
climbed steadily to nearly 4.7% by March
1999.
In summary, the unemployment
rate
in the United States
showed a consistent decline, while
in Japan
, there was a noticeable upward trend. The overall
picture suggests that the labor
markets in these two countries followed distinct trajectories during the specified time frame.Change the spelling
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