The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014

The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014
The diagram illustrates the process of
the
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brick manufacturing used in the building industry. The process involves seven main stages,
begging
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from
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the digging of
clay
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and ending
of
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the
delivering
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with
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the finished brick.
Firstly
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,
clay
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is dug from the ground using a digger.
This
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clay
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is
then
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passed through a metal grid and a roller to break it down into smaller pieces. After that, sand and water are added to the
clay
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, and the mixture is either poured into
molds
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or cut into brick shapes using a wire cutter.
Next,
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the wet bricks are dried in a drying oven for 24 to 48 hours. Once dried, they go through two stages of heating in a kiln: first at a moderate temperature (200
°C
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to 980
°C
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), and
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at a high temperature (870
°C
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to 1300
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). After firing, the bricks are cooled in a cooling chamber for 48 to 72 hours.
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, the bricks are packaged and transported by truck for delivery.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words clay, °c with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • unemployment rates
  • female unemployment
  • data representation
  • overall trend
  • disparities
  • regional differences
  • insight
  • analysis
  • significant changes
  • employment policies
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