The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014
The graph below shows female
unemployment
rates in the four countries of the Uk
.The numbers on the graph showed increasing and decreasing Correct your spelling
UK
percent
of female Change the spelling
per cent
unemployment
rates.We can see that England has
a rising Wrong verb form
had
percent
of Replace the word
percentage
unemployment
in 2013, but in 2014 percent
of Correct your spelling
the percentage
unemployment
dropped.Wales dropped significantly in 2013 to 5,4 percent
then
Northern Ireland to 5,6 percent
however
by 2014, Wales had dropped significantly from 5,4 percent
to 5,0 percent
although
Northern Ireland steadily fall
from 5,6 Wrong verb form
fell
percent
to 4,6 percent
.Then
England in 2013 from 6,8 percent
increased Change the spelling
per cent
then
Scotland but Scotland in 2014 dramatically rise to 6,7 percent
Change the spelling
per cent
then
England to 6,5 percent
Change the spelling
per cent
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