The charts gives information about the rate of electrical using for different purposes and how much time spent by the owner of houses in the year 1920 to 2019 in a country.
The charts
gives
information about the Change the verb form
give
rate
of electrical using
for different purposes and how much time Replace the word
use
spent
by the owner of houses in the Add a missing verb
was spent
year
1920 to 2019 in a country.
It is clear that
the refrigerator used the highest rate
(100%) of electricity
in the year
1980, while
the rate
of using
Verb problem
apply
electricity
used by the washing machine decreased to 65% in the same year
. Additionally
, the rate
of electricity
signeficantly
increased Correct your spelling
significantly
by
the vacuum cleaner and Change preposition
with
reache
to peak Correct your spelling
reached
reach
100
% in the Change preposition
of 100
year
2000.
Regarding to
the number of Remove the preposition
apply
hours
, in the year
1920, it reached to
the highest number Change preposition
apply
50
Change preposition
of 50
hours
per week, while
, after two decades, it nearly declined by half. Interstingly
, in the Correct your spelling
Interestingly
year
1980, the number of hours
incredibly reduced to 12 hours
per week. It remaned
unchanged from 1980 to 2000, Correct your spelling
remained
then
again strted
to decrease to 10 Correct your spelling
started
hours
per week.
Overall
, the rate
of using electricity
by households increased significantly, and the amount of time declined gradually.Submitted by bashdar981 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, year, electricity, hours with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "gives" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
▼