The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.) Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.
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The bar chart illustrates the average weekly
hours
of unpaid work
, such
activities as childcare at home, housework, or gardening, done by people of different categories, compared with the number of kids in the household
.
Overall
, married women
performed notably more work
, and the more kids were present in the household
, the more hours
women
worked. For men
, the number of children didn't really affect their weekly hours
of unpaid work
.
Firstly
, for the childless household
women
were seen executing 30 hours
of housework per week, whilst men
would do scarcely 20 hours
. Then
, when there were 1 to 2 kids present at home, the amount of work
a woman did increase
by around 75%, totalling up to 55 Wrong verb form
increased
hours
of free labour. Here, for men
, the results didn't change at all. Finally
, in a household
with 3 children or more, a woman did nearly 60 hours
of housework, which makes it double the number of hours
a woman did at home with no children, whilst men
completed up to 15 hours
of work
at best.
To sum up
, we can see that this
data shows us a great imbalance of weekly hours
of unpaid labour done by men
and women
, as women
were seen to do significantly more work
as the household
grew.Submitted by overchuk.wtp on
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