The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The given diagram illustrates the proportion of Australian males and females who did regular physical activity in 2010 by various
age
groups.
Overall
, women
from early adulthood (25 to 34) to late middle age
(55 to 64) seemed to do more regular physical activity than men.
At the age
of 15 to 24, the percentage of Australian males doing regular physical activity accounted for roughly 53%, whereas
the percentage was slightly lower in the women
segment at approximately 48%. Moreover
, it can be observed from the 25-to-34 group that the figure for the women
segment remained almost the same compared to the previously mentioned group, however
, there was a noticeable downfall in the figure for males as it dipped to about 42%.
All three age
groups from the range of 35 to 64 shared the same pattern as the percentages of Australian women
were relatively high at almost 50% and the percentages of men still remained lower at around 40 to 45 percent. In addition
, the late adulthood group (65 and over) had relatively equal figures at roughly 47% for both segments.Submitted by Phạm Hải Anh on
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