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The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. RITING ›u should rite abol Some Why i deve five re nowle Vrite Sources National Government Local Taxes Other sources (eg grants) Total Police Budget 2017-2018 (in £m) 2017 175.5m 91.2m 38m 304.7m 2018 177.8m 102.3m 38.5m 318.6m How the money was spent 17% 17% 8% 14% 75% 69% 2017 2018 Salaries (officers and staff) Technology Buildings and transport

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. RITING ›u should rite abol Some Why i deve five re nowle Vrite Sources National Government Local Taxes Other sources (eg grants) Total Police Budget 2017-2018 (in £m) 2017 175.5m 91.2m 38m 304.7m 2018 177.8m 102.3m 38.5m 318.6m How the money was spent 17% 17% 8% 14% 75% 69% 2017 2018 Salaries (officers and staff) Technology Buildings and transport
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The above tables and pie charts illustrate the data on the police budget from 2017 and 2018 in Britain. The table tells, how can they get
money
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as well as
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 a pie chart describing how it is distributed.
To begin
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 with, in table. There are three sources are help to earn
money
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 namely national governments, local taxes and other sources. The National government is the main source for gaining
money
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 in both years.
Also
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, the lowest
money
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 came from other sources around 38 million dollars in 2017 and 2018.
Therefore
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, they got a bigger budget in 2018 than in 2017.
On the other hand
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, the
money
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 was spent in three ways
such
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 as salaries for officers and staff, technologies and buildings and transport. Normally, more
money
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 was spent on salaries in both years.
However
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, in 2017 a higher amount of budget was spent than in 2018 approximately 75 per cent.
Moreover
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, in both years some percentage of the
money
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 was spent around 17 per cent.
Furthermore
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, the high amount of
money
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 spent on technology in 2018 is 14 per cent.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words money with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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